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Monday, 11 April 2016

Andre Bio Poem



Andre .
Funny, Fast, Fun .
Who enjoys scootering, call of duty black ops 3 and doing flips.
Who is able to do a backflips.
Who feels fun.
Who wonders if every won will be on devices in the future.
Who fears snakes.
Who cares about his family and friends.
Who dreams of being a professional scooter rider.



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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous11:37 am, May 30, 2016

    Hi andre
    My name is Melianna, I am from Christ the king Catholic school.
    It is cool that you like to do these thing, but for feedback you didn't make sense you said " who is able to do a backflips" if you can re-read the work then that will be awesome.
    You can comment on my blog at
    http://ctkmeliannaat.blogspot.co.nz/
    or if you want my class blog at
    http://ctktyrell.blogspot.co.nz/

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  2. Anonymous11:38 am, May 30, 2016

    Hi andre
    My name is Melianna, I am from Christ the king Catholic school.
    It is cool that you like to do these thing, but for feedback you didn't make sense you said " who is able to do a backflips" if you can re-read the work then that will be awesome.
    You can comment on my blog at
    http://ctkmeliannaat.blogspot.co.nz/
    or if you want my class blog at
    http://ctktyrell.blogspot.co.nz/

    ReplyDelete

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